Tanka: Departing Geese


This is my first attempt at a Tanka..
See also….
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/01/carpe-diem-make-haiku-complete-5.html?m=1
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Departing geese
Wing tip to tip, mirrors wave
Ice recedes at Springs behest
Flowing, growing, nested rest

7 thoughts on “Tanka: Departing Geese”

      1. it’s really a good tanka, but I recall that your tanka missed a 5th line, I had posted my comment already … I am a passionate haiku-poet and I love to share my knowledge about it … of course I promote this japanese poetry right from my heart. It’s always great to see how poets start to write haiku and tanka … and that makes me so happy.

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