Murder Man: Chapter 3


My friend Sherlock Holmes and I had long discussed and anticipated our trip abroad to the colonies from Holmes’ study at 22 Baker Street.Image

Holmes had been invited to the states to lecture at a symposium on the future of applied forensic sciences and was very eager, in his usual stolid manner, to make the journey.

“It may have something to do with the paper I wrote on crime scene chemical analysis” He said, the blue smoke from his pipe curling around his gaunt narrow face, vaguely shrouding the furrowed brow and heavy lidded eyes as he sat with his legs splayed out in a most relaxed repose from his big dusty arm chair.

“Most assuredly” I quickly added to his comment. “You have done great research in that very field on numerous cases, I myself, a participant in many.”

Holmes’ did not acknowledge my statement nor seemed to be any longer aware of my presence in the room.

 His eyes were closed now, a posture that I immediately knew as deep meditative thought.

“You obviously think that there is something else?” I asked, somewhat concerned with Holmes’ distraction.

His eyes opened and he removed the pipe from his lips, the smoke uncurling from around his body like that of an awakened snake. “I received a letter” he said, drawing an envelope from the pocket of his house robe “A very, singular letter” he said with a note of perplexity , his eyes glanced over the scrawled hand writing that I could see from my very own chair.

“It’s from a man, particularly a very frightened man, from Atlanta, in the state of Georgia.

“Atlanta, Georgia?” I inquired somewhat confused, for my friend Holmes’ usually had some infrequent connections with the colonies on professional matters but never before had I seen him take any interests in any form to correspondences from an individual.

My curiosity peaked, a usual occurrence in Holmes’ presence, I asked him “How can you tell it’s a man, or for that matter, a frightened man?”

“You know my methods of deduction” Holmes’ replied as if humoring, for the umpteenth time, an obstinate pupil.Image

He spread the letter out upon his lap, his wide thin hands pressing it down where the glow from his desk lamp would cast a better light upon it.

Here is the content of the letter from Atlanta, Georgia as Holmes read it to me:

“Dear Mr. Holmes,

I don’t know how to write real good, and I ain’t got no idea if you’d even be interested in what I got to say, but I’m gonna tell you anyways and I hope you can help me.”

Holmes looked up at me and said “Very singular indeed”   I nodded, my face showing the interest he was accustomed to at these moments, He grinned, the letter continued thus:

“I have read about you in books and I know yer a smart guy and have fixed problems for a bunch of folks.

“I ain’t got much in the way of money, but I’m sure right about now, I’d sell my mama to find out what’s wrong with my house”

Holmes stopped reading the letter at this juncture.

His bushy brow knotted into a basket of concentration, the pipe began to smoke again.

“His house?”  I said, quite stupefied at Holmes’ interest in such a letter in the first place

Even though I have known my friend for many years and traveled through many strange times and cases I always seem to be in a constant state of ignorance about his god-like gifts for reasoning and deduction.

But I could tell by the stern manner in which his pale face was set, that Holmes found this letter to be very interesting indeed.

 I myself could not tell from what I had heard thus far from the letter that the writer was frightened or how Holmes was taking particular interest in the type of paper the letter was written, but I knew from experience that Holmes had seen something between the lines, so to say.

“I will read the rest of the letter to you on our way to America” he said, putting the letter back into his robes pocket.

“America, we’re going…?” I said dumbfounded.

“You don’t think that I would investigate something this particular and scintillating without my good friend the doctor do you”

He grinned at me in his sly way, a twinkle in his eyes I thought.

“I must have my muse to keep me honest” he said.

“Why does this letter concern you so greatly?” I asked, still reeling with the idea that I was going to America, and to what purpose, other than my friends fancy.

Holmes stepped before me and placed his hands on my shoulders, his gray eyes fixed on mine.

“This letter is dated from the year 2014 dear doctor”

I blinked….”2014…?” Why that’s….

“Not possible?” said Holmes.

I didn’t know what to say.

Holmes just gripped my shoulders tighter and said:

“What interests me the most about this letter is not the date” Holmes said.

I was speechless. My mind was in total chaos, as if I were beginning to spin out of control.

“My interest in this letter has to do with the man’s last name and his Great Great Uncle, a certain fellow you and I have had the pleasure of meeting once or twice.”

My eyes asked the question before my lips could move.

“Moriarty” Holmes said….

I stammered…”Dead….” i felt my hands begin to tremble, the dim, smoky study seemed to tilt and canter to one side.

Holmes eyes twinkled as he drew me closer, and in a low strained voice he whispered

“Singular indeed Watson, singular…indeed”

4 thoughts on “Murder Man: Chapter 3”

      1. I understand the main character’s English is deliberately bad, but can you ease off a little bit? He’s beginning to sound like a caricature, and I want to feel more kindly towards him. The Moriarity link opens up all kinds of conjecture. You have a great premise.

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